by Thermite
my mother and sister were too ugly to play with, so I used a neighbor 2 houses away
and her much under age daughter.
But that's life, like your story. In short, I loved it, it seemed real, natural and dead on. Loved your wit ...quit sitting around pouting and wondering why your not writing and just do more. But then that's what you have just done here.You're fine, don't over-think it. The story was creative, the characters are solid, the theme is imaginative and it's great that you've busted out of the increasingly boring 'formula'.. . that's probably why you didn't want to write.
Thermite? I hope you taste better than Vegemite.
for me to comment, except to honor your wishes to vote and comment. This was well written and very much enjoyed. A sequel would be equally enjoyed.
Maybe the sister could be brought into "play", still leaving the dad out of it.
Will be watching for your name for future submittals.
The mother seemed to be looking for a good stiff cock for her happiness. After a few rounds she may look for more risky behavior. That will be great reading as well.
My first dip into your work, and it was delightful! Thanks, and bring on chapter 2!
Not really my kind of thing but so bloody well written that I had to give it 5 stars. Christ help me if you write something that really tickles my sensibilities.
Do teagan & tara fuck each other? They are naked or at least topless.
Writing is great. What's next for the family.
Have Teagan and Tara fucked? Been topless and anything more?
I loved the hot story it turned me on .I don't have a son to fuck me. I enjoy my dad, best fuck ever.
I know that you said a short trip back into writing, but this was definately a slam, bam, thank you Son thing.
Short and sweet but not rushed, and some refreshingly filthy descriptions. One of the best of the newest offerings. Great job, keep it up.
I agree that this was a quick foray into the tale of this family. I hope, that you can see your way, to allow us further glimpses, into their lives.
what a scum of the earth slut. I would fuck that whore for anything. her cunt is called STD Central.....
I enjoyed this story. I find the sexual situation/attitude of the mother and son strangely unique but perfectly within normal bounds. I notice the author has not written anything recently but hope she continues. Her style of writi is good but with practice could get better.ng