All Comments on 'Work The Problem Ch. 02'

by Mr_Shoggoth

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great Part II - Many thanks

Thanks Mr. _ Shoggoth for an enjoyable read . Needless to say .... I am looking forward to part III .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Need more asap

this story is great i cant stop reading bad thing is its not long enough lol cant wait for more

PerryNormalPerryNormalalmost 7 years ago
Delightfully unique!

Well! This a pleasent change from the average werewolf, (wererabbit?), romance. Your story has many new and potentially interesting avenues that could be explored. I hope that you won't become lost on the sloppy sex trail. It's like salt on fine cuisine. A pinch may enhance the taste, but too much will quickly ruin the meal. So far, though, a fun tale and good reading!

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 7 years ago
Ch 2 is better than the first.

Looking forward to more.

Tall_kTall_kalmost 7 years ago
More Please

I really like your stories. Your characters are developed well enough and the plots so interesting that I find myself sympathizing with the characters and wanting to discover what happens next. I especially look forward to seeing how this story unfolds. Keep up the good work!

Crusader235Crusader235almost 7 years ago
Finish?

Excellent chapters 1 & 2. Sure hope there's more chapters to finish this delightful tale!

RavedThradRavedThradalmost 6 years ago
Does Holly eat eggs?

Pancakes have eggs, right?

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

Good story but now that they have the Government and the contractor involved, it will probably turn into a crap show. Interested to see how it works out for them.

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