All Comments on 'Changing Rooms'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
A great start

I love how this story progresses. Looking forward to chapter 2! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Brilliant

Can't wait for the next installment.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 7 years ago
Beautiful story of love

All mothers and sons should experience such beautiful uninhibited love.

Alwaystaboo

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Not bad

Just the incest came too easy. ***

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
GOOD JOB

WELL DONE! NOW, ON TO CHAPTER TWO. GOOD LUCK, AM LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER AND MORE STORIES.

prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
One of the best mom/son story lines

Sexy and tender

oedipusrex30oedipusrex30almost 7 years ago
Wonderful start

I hope we can read many more from you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Fantastic story

Quite a few grown sons end up living with mom for various reasons. The situation progresses to have each fulfill their needs. It is a most wonderful thing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Write the 2 part

Talk about you being rock hard, shoot I could change a tire with my tool! What about taking mom in a public place and feel how hot this is

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
hot

chapter 2 please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Commendation

A good start, neither rush or hold-up chapter two and take care of the characters.

lowkeyonelowkeyonealmost 7 years ago
STORE POLICY

You must wear your underwear when trying on swim wear but you are exempt when trying on string bikinis.?

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518almost 7 years ago
nice!

the Hallmark of a good incest story is the long, slow buildup that leads the family members to eschew the rules of polite society, and fuck like bunnies, and your story did that in spades!

5*s

The MouseThe Mousealmost 7 years ago
Great start!

I'm torn between thinking things happened a little TOO easily & quickly, and loving the build-up and subsequent coupling.

As a wordy writer myself, I'd have preferred a bit more detail in the sex scene, but overall very enjoyable.

Looking forward to Chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
A good start

A good start 5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
im thinking

I wouldnt have held off to get out of the pool. Naked and with a hard bone, it should have been driven home when he pulled her onto him from the edge of the pool.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Having her get waxed ruined it...thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Pig shit....

It doesn't happen like that at all.......

sunburycdsunburycdover 6 years agoAuthor
Pig shit?

Thanks for your input and going out of your way to comment. Hope your day improves.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
Good story, but

Hi Mom,

Sorry I haven't kept in touch over the years

Let's f-*k

I liked the concept, it just seemed to hurry really fast.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Shouldn't have shaved pussy

I wish she hadn't completely shaved her pussy. A little hair is good. Also it was all a bit rushed.

funseeker1186funseeker1186about 6 years ago
One of the best! Very erotic!!

I'm amazed that anyone has a problem with this story! It's one of the best yet! The only problem with this story is that I want it to continue for several more chapters. Keep writing please, Thank You!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Very rushed

Should've paced it out

Good luck next time

jneric2691jneric2691almost 6 years ago
I liked it!

Yes the are some inconsistency, It happens. And getting waxed, I've heard of it being done like that. I guess some people like bushes. I know I've hacked up a hairball or two. But, it still is a good story.

blackknight314blackknight314over 4 years ago
A good story...

... I thought it a bit rushed. There was no indecision about the taboo of incest at all. Yes it could happen that way but I doubt it would very often.

Why not tell your coworkers he is your son, but spit it right out to the clerk at the swimsuit store.

These are not complaints, just observations for my own take on the story. Chapter 2 is next. Wooo Hooo!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 4 years ago

Loved it!! Five stars and a favorite point!

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
LIKE I ASKED BEFORE. ^*!^*!^*!

Why do most of the better stories,

always read so fast???. Like this one,

it was well written, great story line,

and the players seemed so real.

...THANK YOU...

ps. for a short story. 5+******

Danno_61455Danno_61455about 4 years ago
NOT A FAVORITE BUT 4.5 STARS

I like the hair on her pussy. Bald is always a coming across like a gimmick. There are many many many babes who leave hair on the front and clean up just the lips.

linnearlinnearalmost 3 years ago
Mind Blown

I absolutely love your writing, it is so damn sexy.

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGaleabout 2 years ago

Wonderful beginning to this series........():\

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story. Would have liked it if mom had only trimmed and shaped the bush. Shaved always looks juvenile to me. Women have a bush, no matter how the size, girls do not.

Marklynda2Marklynda212 months ago

It's a shame they wasted so much time due to his wife. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I would love to read about the first time mom takes your throbbing cock in her mouth and swallows all that cum

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Was a great lead up. Shaving the bush ruined it for me. Good story though.

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