by sunburycd
I love how this story progresses. Looking forward to chapter 2! :-)
All mothers and sons should experience such beautiful uninhibited love.
Alwaystaboo
WELL DONE! NOW, ON TO CHAPTER TWO. GOOD LUCK, AM LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER AND MORE STORIES.
Quite a few grown sons end up living with mom for various reasons. The situation progresses to have each fulfill their needs. It is a most wonderful thing
Talk about you being rock hard, shoot I could change a tire with my tool! What about taking mom in a public place and feel how hot this is
A good start, neither rush or hold-up chapter two and take care of the characters.
You must wear your underwear when trying on swim wear but you are exempt when trying on string bikinis.?
the Hallmark of a good incest story is the long, slow buildup that leads the family members to eschew the rules of polite society, and fuck like bunnies, and your story did that in spades!
5*s
I'm torn between thinking things happened a little TOO easily & quickly, and loving the build-up and subsequent coupling.
As a wordy writer myself, I'd have preferred a bit more detail in the sex scene, but overall very enjoyable.
Looking forward to Chapter 2.
I wouldnt have held off to get out of the pool. Naked and with a hard bone, it should have been driven home when he pulled her onto him from the edge of the pool.
Thanks for your input and going out of your way to comment. Hope your day improves.
Hi Mom,
Sorry I haven't kept in touch over the years
Let's f-*k
I liked the concept, it just seemed to hurry really fast.
I wish she hadn't completely shaved her pussy. A little hair is good. Also it was all a bit rushed.
I'm amazed that anyone has a problem with this story! It's one of the best yet! The only problem with this story is that I want it to continue for several more chapters. Keep writing please, Thank You!!!
Yes the are some inconsistency, It happens. And getting waxed, I've heard of it being done like that. I guess some people like bushes. I know I've hacked up a hairball or two. But, it still is a good story.
... I thought it a bit rushed. There was no indecision about the taboo of incest at all. Yes it could happen that way but I doubt it would very often.
Why not tell your coworkers he is your son, but spit it right out to the clerk at the swimsuit store.
These are not complaints, just observations for my own take on the story. Chapter 2 is next. Wooo Hooo!
Why do most of the better stories,
always read so fast???. Like this one,
it was well written, great story line,
and the players seemed so real.
...THANK YOU...
ps. for a short story. 5+******
I like the hair on her pussy. Bald is always a coming across like a gimmick. There are many many many babes who leave hair on the front and clean up just the lips.
Great story. Would have liked it if mom had only trimmed and shaped the bush. Shaved always looks juvenile to me. Women have a bush, no matter how the size, girls do not.
It's a shame they wasted so much time due to his wife. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
I would love to read about the first time mom takes your throbbing cock in her mouth and swallows all that cum