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Alone at Work

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/14/17

Wow

That was beautifully executed! Good to see an author who's not afraid to put a rape story in the non consent/reluctance section because of late, it feels like nobody seems to understand the definition

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by Anonymous05/14/17

5 stars

On one hand I don't like rape stories at all.

On the other hand this was a good story, well written, no spelling errors.

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by Anonymous05/15/17

Good story.

I liked this. It has the potential to be a series, with the girl being used nightly as a fuck-toy as Richard shares her with the other co-workers. She clearly knows her place in the world.

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Thank you!

I'm so glad you guys enjoy the story!

I wasn't planning to post more of this story, but if there is a demand for it I will post other incidents.

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by CrissySnow05/16/17

👊

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by Anonymous05/17/17

so curious

I'm really curious to know what people think "non consent" means. No consent is rape isn't it? I mean if someone wants to fuck you and you don't give consent, but they do it anyway....that's rape. Really tired of people negatively commenting saying its bad because its rape.

That being said this was a well written story that I found really hot. Super appreciative there are no spelling errors! I would definitely like to hear about more shenanigans with the night shift

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by Anonymous05/18/17

Nicely Written!

This is definitely what I look for when I come to this section. Just wished it was a bit longer :P.

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by Anonymous05/18/17

Amazing!

I don't normally comment on stories but I had to on this one, very well written unlike most on here. kept me intrigued the whole time and fantastic sex, I could just imagine the whole thing happening. more please!

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Hott!

A great mix of anticipation and hot descriptions. You have a real way with words

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by Anonymous07/25/17

You need an editor.

Fiction piece uses incorrect punctuation. Dialogue is cheesy, forced, and abuses the exclamation marks. Are your hysterical characters just perpetually screaming? The plot moves too quickly and the very flat characters have little to no support, seemingly ripped from "wanted" posters. Hun, If you want to write better, you need harder criticism, and you aren't getting it from the idiots above.

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by Anonymous08/08/17

YEAH I KNOW..

This is a non-consent story but somehow I just can't get past a woman simply laughing off a violent rape. Liking the guy or not rape is rape.

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by Anonymous12/17/17

That’s a Huge Bitch

I just want to make sure you know that someone who’s 5’2” and weighs 175lbs is either a body builder with massive muscle mass or a dough ball with 3 extra chins. Couldn’t get into either picture.At half a foot taller than her, my sister and I both weigh 40 pounds less, just wondering if that was your intention or an accident. Might have helped if you had described her in any other terms than her exact height and weight.

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by Anonymous03/03/18

Ugghh...

It was soo bad.

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by Anonymous03/12/18

Very hot

Damn, all of the comments were petty af, I loved your story! People need to chill, keep writing my friend:)

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by Anonymous04/28/18

Love it!

Keep writing it had a great background to it to follow. Was a great story. If your not into rape then why read a rape story. if you don't like her weight description then stop reading it. Ignore those negative comments they are just jealous they can't write. Keep writing!

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by killerxbunny66606/26/18

I loved it!

It was a great story! I loved how the tension built up between the characters.

My only issue is in the comment section. The inaccurate comment left about the woman being a "big bitch" isn't constructive or true. I'm 5'1 and weigh 178 lbs. I'm not a body builder but I'm definitely not fat. I have 1 chin, a killer hourglass figure and a flat stomach. My ass is huge though, I'll give you that. Lol! So let's maybe not jump to conclusions about weight. We all carry weight differently, so lets all try to be nice and accurate. However I'm sure your goal wasn't to make others feel badly about themselves, but instead to help the author. :)

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