All Comments on 'A Guy and His...? Ch. 02: Beginnings'

Just wanted everyone to know this was the first story I wrote when I started to write two years ago, again. I am still writing the story even now. I apologize if the story is rough my writing does improve greatly as all will see.

Pars001

Two yrs and 55 chapters into the story,with no end in sight.Master Jake while screwing the "Good Genies",is slowly but surely bringing 1or2 "Bad Genies" back from the (a)void,so as to turn them into Good Genies.

20 yrs later,and we are up to chap 555,and Jake is still screwing the Genies into existance.

Soap Opera.

I have followed your writings from 'other' sites. I never read this one tho...... I'm a fan of Lost Empire. I (personally) believe 'For the love of Lana' to be your best work so far. Thanks for posting here.

With as many stories as it sounds like you've written I would have expected better grammar and punctuation. At least get someone to proof read for you.

Actually i find its rare to find someone so dedicated to writing these stories, and this is a good story. Thanks.

Freeing the genie is a common theme... 5 stars!!!

Ah, the magical power of love. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

I'm so glad that I found this story!!! I've always loved the Genie genre and I do especially love it when the genie is freed! Can't wait to read the rest!!!