All Comments on 'Love Thy Neighbour Ch. 05'

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ender2k2kender2k2kalmost 7 years ago
Great chapter

This story keeps getting better and better. Thanks

PickeringPickeringalmost 7 years ago
Great story!

more please.

thanks for writing this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More - but

This is a gripping story. But, please give a bigger bite at it in each chapter. Less that a page doesn't give time to enjoy your writing.

LittleBrainLittleBrainalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Bigger chapters

I take your point about bigger chapters but I'm trying to keep something flowing as I understand folks don't want to have too long a gap between chapters. Unfortunately time does not always permit longer spells of writing and I am not always sure when the next opportunity will arise.

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticalmost 7 years ago
Great chapter!

At last they begin to know the secrets of Greg!

This story is getting very interesting and a bit complicated ...

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
excellent drama

Please continue. I don't normally comment but this has me captivated!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great Story!

I'm enjoying this story a lot, and I look forward to more. Thank you for writing and sharing it!

WargamerWargamerover 1 year ago

Great story 5/5

Reading on

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