All Comments on 'Fag Boys Suck Ch. 02'

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KidG1000KidG1000almost 7 years ago
great story

loving it! i wish it was longer. (thats what she said)

really hot story! thank you for including the foot fetish parts, so hot. i love some good cuckold humiliation and this is delivering. i cant wait to read about them submitting like a good little boy and girl to their real man master. so delicious

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

What was happening in chapter one seems to contradict what was told to them in chapter two. A bit of bait and switch to my thinking. Seems the crazy dommes were just more open and honest about their plans than this master who lured them in under somewhat false promises. I'm feeling a bit judgey, but while wait to see how the story unfolds before voting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Did you proof read this mess?

It's all over the place and doesn't really connect with chapter one. Get an editor.

bk3rdbk3rdover 6 years ago
5*s

I don't agree w/ comment that 2nd chapter contradicts 1st. It's a progression to his cuckolding and conversion to being a submissive cocksucker! Looking forward to next chapter. Hope he remains reluctant to serve the dom but is coerced by his wife who begins to domme him even as she submits to the dom.

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