All Comments on 'Decisions Ch. 12'

I have read the whole story and from a man's view, parts of the story were very good. The games, protest, balls and meeting were all well thought out and written. Even the parts where Chris was injured were not bad in-spite of glossing over some stuff in favor of "feelings".

That said the emotional parts would have had any guy hanging himself. Most men just do not think that way. If you cut Chris's self doubts and thinking about how Anna is his soul mate in half you would be much more realistic. I know women want men to think about them all the time and pine away for them when apart, but it just does not happen in real life. We do think about those we love and we do miss them, but not on the level you have written.

As the story progressed I got to the point of skipping the "feelings" parts which while it cut the story by 2/3 made it much more enjoyable and easier to read. Like I said, parts were very good but if you are going to write a story from a male's viewpoint you might want to tone that down.

I absolutely loved reading this series! I'm glad that they are having a happy life. If you decide to continue with this story, I can't wait to see what happens next. Chris would make an excellent Gov and maybe even President.

Thank you for your time and efforts in sharing your story!

Would weep manly tears again.

Very well written. I always looked forward to your updates. I hope you continue to write stories in this vein.

You have created a wonderful story that never failed to leave a smile on my face. Thank you and keep up the good work.

I absolutely loved this story but I just have one question are both kids vampires

One of the best stories I have read on this site. It saddens me that the story has concluded. But, the way you end it was amazing.

I really liked how you ended the story. One question though, what about the werewolf pack?

I really hated to see this story end, but the way you did it left me feeling totally satisfied. I will look forward to many more of your stories in the future!

For telling an enjoyable story.

Probably the best story (or story series) i've read on this on this site and i really enjoyed it. Deserves the honor of my first comment, i guess.

Thanks.

(I hope you'll be writing your next story soon.)

Really enjoyed this entire series of story's

Like others have posted: I hate to see this story end! I looked forward to each and every chapter! I think it was very well written and even though I'm a guy I liked the "feelings" parts just as much as the rest!

I'm really looking forward to your future works and I really hope there will be some continuation of this series, whether it is Chris & Stasi or even Cat & Rob: I know it will definitely be a pleasure to read! Keep up the good work!

Can't wait for what you do next.

I would love to read the story of Chris and stasi, in college tho :)

That was an amazing story, top 5 on my list. I really hope you continue it! It’s be great to revisit Stasi and Chris in their own world as adults or even in college.. idk your the author but either way! I hope to read more from you soon!

Just finished reading and love it great story and everything. I love reading great stories like this but hate when they come to a end lol. Hope you have many more stories to come

Please tell me there is a place on the net where i can get more stories from you. I love your writing style and really hope that you are still writing.

It's 4:13 a.m. and i'm just finishing this story.

Came to jerk off to monster girls, left with a warm feeling in my heart.

Easily one of the best stories on this site.

Laughed my assignment of when I saw the previous comment stating that it was 4:13 am. Because that's the exact time I finished the story as well. Good story!

Fantastic read - hope you write some more as I just couldn’t put this down till I finished it.

Wow I only come across stories that are binge worthy once in a blue moon. Thank you for the laughs the tears and the battles against injustice.

Richard

A great story. Thank you so much for taking the time to write it. I loved the wholesomeness, the sports, the civil rights issues, the romance, the happy ending. All of it. You have a real talent with words - the wittiness and banter had me continuously scrolling for one more paragraph. I wish you success in whatever your future endeavors are. :)

Took me a few days to read it all. Partially because I had to search up most the Russian phrases I didn’t remember but felt I’d heard before. *snickers* I remembered most of the curse words...had some Russian friends growing up that taught me most of the common ones.

Like some other commentators, I don’t have anything negative at all to say about this series and too much positive to note it all. Love the story ark, the witty sassiness of the characters, the details you described in the events, discussions, romances that make this series in the top 10 for me.

At this point I’ve read over 600 stories so that’s saying something in my opinion.

Like some others noted, I agree with a hopefulness of a continuation of the story line, either rob-cat or Chris-stasi as the main focus .

I wish you the best in your endeavors.

Wow! This was an intense story but I absolutely loved it. Talk about a power couple! I hope you continue Robert and Lilith’s story.

I freaking loved this story. Best thing I've read in a long time!

My only issue is this didnt last longer and cover the years in more detail. amazing story. thank you writing this.

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Great series!

Excellent characters and world building with good incorporation of real life aspects.

Love the addition of Twix and 'hangry'.

11/10 Twix Bars!!!!!

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Pt. Duex

I forgot to mention the accidental humour in naming Chris' mom Susan and Stasi's dad Anton...then putting them together in a sentence making it read 'Susan Anton' a 1970s/1980s actress.

Spence?:>}

Great story 5 stars throughout. When it's over, then it's done. Nice recap of supporting cast: where are they now, very well done. In 14 years, the DTOSA laws never made it to SCOTUS? Even though it was an obvious reversal of Brown vs Board of Education and back to 'Separate but Equal' and 14th Amendment's equal protection clause? Personally, I've retired from EMS after nearly 18 years, sent out my 'farewell address', dropped off my uniforms and badge, and am busy writing EMS essays and reading Lit. Might have a story or two for you myself.

Anon56

I really liked this I hope you do another like this!!!!

Loved every part of this