by OG4U
Keep up the god work, a few small grammar mistakes but good so far. Waiting for chapter 4
I'd spank my editor for the grammar errors, but she lives over 1000 miles from me, we've never met or even talked on the phone, but she might like to be spanked, LOL
Of course, to make it all the more difficult, I think I'm falling for her. ;-)
Thanks for reading and for your very kind comment.
Please do not let this series stop!!! It is incredible and I would love to see how their relationship evolves over the years!
I very much appreciate your enthusiasm. I assure you I will do my best,
Love the story, hope slavelana dominates her sister and husband ....
I'm still trying to decide exactly how I want to work Mom and Dad into this. I know I need adding twists and turns and I do not wish for everything to be too obvious and transparent. It's quite a challenge. You guys are a tough audience. Keeping you interested is not as easy as many may think.
Thanks for your support.
needs some more polish but it's turning out well. my girls suggest the desire/fantasy of impregnation but do as you will. rest assured we'll keep reading regardless.
Actually, that will be in a future chapter wait and see how I handle it.
Thank you for your private feedback. I write for you, my readers. I am not so rigid that I will not, at least, attempt to work your suggestion into the story and I will give you the "nod" you requested. Give me a chapter or two to try to work it in.
Chapter 04 is taking longer to write than I expected. I'm trying to make it hot enough to make my editor's panties soaking wet. ;-)
Thanks a bunch for your support
Can't wait to see mom & dad over.
What about fucking mom with madge watching
Thank you for not giving up on me.
I'm a new author here and it has become apparent to me that this is no longer my story. It now belongs to all of you, my readers. I deeply appreciate all of the comments and private feedback I receive. I can see I've got my work cut out for me.
Many thanks to you all.
yesssss, many more please, i hope you think for a longshut stories...............Please!
Thanks for your comment here and also for your private feedback. Without readers, like all of you, I would have little reason to write.
Merci, mon ami
I plan to keep writing until my last reader crushes my fingers with a sledge hammer and tells me to crawl back under the rock from whence I came. ;-)
after reading many stories on here , this has to be one of the best I've come across in a long time. Truly a gifted artist with story telling. You have to keep writing more chapters. Can't wait to see whats next.
There are many, many authors on here who are far more talented than I, your kind words are most graciously welcomed and appreciated.
This is just the right amount of story and sex. I am not sure if I should virtually kiss you or demand that you publish the next chapter. Please keep up the great work.
Kisses are always welcome even virtual kisses, just no tongue unless you are a girl. ;-)
I'll add a new chapter in a few days.
Thank you for reading my stories.
I understand that everyone needs a break but when is the next chapter?
Sorry for the delay in proceeding with the story. I've been a little distracted over the past 3 weeks or so. I'll try to finish chapter this week and hopefully have it published early next week.
A few real life issues caused an unforeseen delay in completing the next chapter. I will make a concerted effort to finish writing and submitting it over the next few days and get back on a more consistent schedule of writing. Sometimes life can just be a real bummer.
Thank you for your patience and understanding.
Yes, there will be a few more chapters to this story a little later. Right now, I am working on a couple of other things plus deer season is open so my time is limited.
That was one HOT chapter!!!
My blue jeans have a huge wet spot on them.
More please much more.
5 fucking 🌟
Thank goodness I felt really uncomfortable at their relationship dynamic in chapter 2, dysfunctional and cruel. I am so glad to see Marge / Talana put her foot down and gain her balance in the relationship