by SciFurz
First Guy gets into an accident, has some form of amnesia, enters a cabin in the middle of a forest, see his furry girlfriends and Tobias, and they are like total strangers? I don't get it. What's up? Not a bad chapter but definitely not a good chapter.
This chapter seems to have been written in the style you would see in an anime.
The chapter was good, they style is engaging, and the characters are a riot.
Keep up the good work.
Ah, I think you missed the episode description which is actually the title; Guy and the Seven Furries.
Reread the end and it might ring a bell? :-)
We can't all be lovers of great literature. *ducks the books thrown at him*
I did have anime and manga a bit in mind when the idea of doing this fairy tale episode came to mind. You see things like this more often in those series as a fun break between regular episodes.
In the anime maid sama they did a job on momotaro that was actually pretty funny.
And I understood that last anon comment as much as the first page of the story.
Shame that you write so well SFz, I managed to keep reading enjoying your story telling. Then it made sense at the end, I think. If you were a lesser writer I would have forever been in the dark about the 1st page would have been the last I read.
You have to know the manga or anime, I haven't read or watched a lot, but I did happen to read some of that one.
The twist ending worked well, there were more readers whom I took with surprise. :-)
This episode was like a box of chocolates, you never know what you get until you've eaten the last one. And I don't mean the stomach ache. ;-p
I just love a good confusalimention once in a while.
This dream episode did nothing for me. The main story is excellent. This was pointless to the actual story.
This is a stand alone episode unrelated to the main arc indeed.
Be warned, there will be more like it in the series. :-p
Laughed my ass off, hehe! I was reading along, happily confused and minding my own business, then I slowed down...'heeeey, waitaminute here.... @click!@.
Hehehe!
Not a fan of chapters like this, and especially not this one. Considering it was the first of this "volume" I thought that every volume would be a different story involving the same characters. Because of that I definitely skipped/lightly slimmed this whole chapter.
I do realize that some people like these, and you yourself seemed to enjoy writing it. Because of that I won't request that you don't do chapters like this anymore, but I will request that for future ones like this you label it as what it is so I know not to bother reading it.
Well that was an interesting detour. I liked it and thought you merged the two stories well but it wasn't what I was hoping for in the next chapter. Still, hard to complain too much. Good job
This chapter has pushed me to quit the story. Not even finishing the chapter. It makes no sense that dude is going to an inn without at least of the girls. Even though it seems like some dream deal, I don’t care. This is a bit of a waste. Rest of the story is good. Thanks
Interesting writing, I may have to read this chapter again a few times to understand. It is written in such a different mindset, a bit like "A midsummer's night dream".
This is the 4th time I've read this story, to bad you don't there's no snake girl
It would've been nice if you had written an introduction of sorts to explain that this chapter would be different from the original storyline.