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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Thank you

Continued greatness of this story line!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Sadness

You need a new proof reader. this story had the worst editing. Many of the sentences should have been two, or they didn't make sense. Please say you're not proofing yourself. Because of the poor editing I could only give it a 4.

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

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Am a clerk here in Florida. I started writing almost three years ago again. I am dabbling in almost all genres. I hope I can bring a little enjoyment to those that have never read me. Also am an old Dom out of the life style for years. Am open to private chat with almost anyon...

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