All Comments on 'Street Find Ch. 03-04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

dimming of the day is a richard thompson song, great singer/songwriter,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Re-cycled?

Nice story, nice writing, but have I not read this somewhere before?

MasterDonald1952MasterDonald1952almost 7 years ago
Nice Writing

I love this story keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Great story keep it going all 5's so far

johntcookseyjohntcookseyalmost 7 years ago
Interesting dynamics

A lot of potential for connection and/or conflict with the characters. Fun story now with Gina added into the mix and now Crystal lurking in the wings, and let's not forget dad looking to re-enter his girls' lives. Stay tuned. ***** Thanks again.

bruce22bruce22almost 7 years ago
Very fine story

This is a luxury item! Gina opens lots of new lines of development.

Freddog6601Freddog6601almost 7 years ago
Nice read

Good characters, nice flow and interesting subjects.

Looking forward to future updates.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
the heart knows better than the brain

Fran might not be stimulated by male penetration

But she might have enjoyed oral?

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
what ever happened about

his stolen car?

Was it recovered?

Replaced?

loragassloragassover 6 years ago
Stolen Vehicles and Insuarnces!

Unless its recovered very quickly, most stolen vehicles take time for the police to close the case out. Which means it takes time for the insurance to payout on the claim. It was said that he was in the rental, by that comment it is assumed that the claim is still open.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Fran and Gina are selfish inconsiderate bitches!! Wimpy Ed is desperate....surely he can get a woman from the audience

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