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The_Artfull_Codgerover 6 years agoA good editor
would have noticed that the protagonist aged 4 years in a day. lnteresting concept.
Anonymousover 6 years agoWOW, you didn't proof read yourself, if you had, you would have found that a character aged 4 years within a day, 1* edit for fucks sake.
Tigr2over 6 years agoAle Works
Be happy to meet you at A1A Ale Works, which you described so well. Truly a regular there. Contact x331bc at bellsouth.net
UltimateHomeBodyover 6 years agoDid not get to the aging part
45 years old, was married 22 years. Maybe he did not understand about her being lesbian because he was a virgin till his late twenties. You got some explaining to do Lucy!
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