All Comments on 'Locke and Key'

Good positive ending, bad guys get put away good guys (and girls) win, but still the sexy mind control stuff I've come to expect from you Chrystal. Good job, I would enjoy seeing more of these two in action.

Would love to read more of this duo. Great job.

Nice flow, just enough backstory. I liked the ending. I would have been really upset if the bad guys had won. As it was, the good guys had to work for it, which is more satisfying.

i hate getting hooked because then Ill want to read it over and over again, and this story got me so hooked. i was both aroused and entertained. good job :)

Good blend of story, sex, and action. And all tied up at the end.

I felt it could have used a bit more smut.

One other thing was it seemed a bit rushed at the end. It just seemed you could have added a bit more drama... like maybe having the bust happen once the auction was under way or about to conclude or something.

Excellent job otherwise.

Great story. Great banter between your leads, nicely evil bad guys, very well done. The ending could have been longer, and maybe a little more sex, but absolutely great as it was.