by vanalas
Talk about CLIFF HANGERS !!! I loved it...
I like Nicholas and I hope he finds the balls to give his mother a good slap. I really want Adrain to find out what the family secret is and why his uncle and his family are like that to him. Get George on to it and let him find that everything should belong to Adrian.
I was really praying that the two mothers and Jake would be dragged away in a police car.
If attempted murder is not a deal breaker or a reason to call the police, then what is? A normal oerson would have called the police and have the family arrested.
This is by far the best story I have ever read. The story line is off the chain. Please let Victoria, Jake, Jane, and that girl get whats coming to them. That bitch Victoria act like it is her wedding, let her marry that monster Jake they should get on really well. I hope things are looking up for Adrain because he is so sweet and have been through so much. It is time for someone else to go through something. Five plus stars. Luv you Adrain!!
U almost killed me vanalas
ohw my God
where is going oh my God
vanalas cant say aword but its so fucking good
plz make it more interesting than ramos[ramon-marcos] which is still leading
so mwaaaa,i loved it
its now protuding to no1 on my billboard of 200 gay love stories
it seems u wana rule my billboard vanalas
its in no 2 now so its up to u to make it lead F.Y
It's hard to love a story when the main character is so pathetic. I get that he is sweet and shy. A grown man subjecting himself to that kind of abuse? Maybe if we knew more about the town and it's culture/location, it might be plausible. I'm going to assume it's an island with no police, lawyers, help agencies or advocates and that everyone who lives in the town, including Nicholas, is a peice of shit.
This is not your first story, if it were I would be more forgiving. Stop insulting our intelligence, I'm crying 'cause I can't get my time back. 16 pages of ' let's drag this out till the reader dies of boredom.'
Nice piece of writing . I followed ur previous series and I can't help but spot the similarities between the two series. Almost same story line.(rich guy/spineless mama's boy with his evil mother. Then d poor guy that suffers ....) well. Still a good story though.
I love your characters so much and this story reminds me of a gay Cinderella story, I really love it.