by MacAndAnn
This was written good, and you saying it was a true story made it some what better but not much, I still believe it is consider cheating even though the spouse knows about it and does not care. but hey this is just my opinion
Let me give you the five stars this tale deserves rather than the three Jinormous ego gave you. I have seen this he/she comment before and its always the same. If they don't like cheating,, (or pseudo cheating,.for much like this guy, I not only wouldn't care, I would encourage my girl to sleel.with another woman, just as long as it's not a dude), then go elsewhere. This is an erotic site, and fictional. He/she can always.go.buy. harlequin if they want.romantic.vanilla sex. I cant wait to hear more, as the term.slut implies she gives it up to other women frequently. Great job.
My vote is five stars, but I'd prefer 4.5 as there was a bit disbelief in the bar scene. Had it been in a front seat or rear I'd say totally cool.
Put some hair on one of your female characters.
Thanks for sharing.
I see 3 out of 4 like it. I agree about that jemima comment. That bitch is always complaining. And like the other two i hope to see more. Slut means she gives it up. A lot. As for the hair, meh. Maybe. But a landing strip. That overgrown brushpile look is never coming back.