All Comments on 'The Iceman's Wrath'

i'm curious where the story is going, hope to read more soon.

Now it's going to be doubly excruciating waiting for updates from you!

I'm so glad that I found this story and can't wait to read the next chapter.

I really enjoyed your first chapter, looking forward to many more! Thanks for sharing!!

I really like you writing style. The characters are real and gritty. Very believable. Keep on writing, I will be watching for more =)

I very much liked your story. The mature gentleman knowing just what and how to take control. I am looking foreword to seeeing. His other conquests of the daughters friends. An idea for a good twist is for one of their moms to find out and come after him. She could also be a few years older which would keep with the mature theme. Just an idea but I think you would do a great job with this story.

Great start. Looking forward to the next installment!

Probably my favorite story on this site.

Thanks for writing it.

Hopefully you continue this story.

Disappointed to discover I had reached the end of the story. I hope very much there will be another chapter or more.

Super beginning. Looking forward to subsequent chapters.

Thè weekend off, Cold micro beer, GoT on TV. I'm still trying to get past that perfect life.

So good of you to add some blush to that little girls cheeks I think you've made a friend, but she's not sure just yet.

The whole setup lends itself to many chapters of sexy fun!!

Please continue and thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Doing an excellent job again.

Awesome like always Annabelle 👿

plots, tales and escapades on the way to college, TK U MLJ LV NV

How is the water running, but their is no power.

Many cities and towns continue to have water pressure when the power goes down. From the size of the town described in the story, they would most likely have a water tower somewhere close and on higher ground.

Amazingly, another utility that still worked was the telephone. Old land line phones are on a separate power supply.

Also, this wasn't a down line/substation outage. It was a planned outage for capacity management. Planned outages would never include critical infrastructure such as water, telephone, hospitals, etc.

Also, phones only work during power cuts if you are on a traditional service. If you are on cable TV or fiber optic based phone service, it requires power (or a battery backup) at the customer end.

the devil on his other.

Both father and daughter are going to have an interesting learning curve

It should be fun to watch.

Fantastic characters and plot, well done!

J

I too need a cold shower by the end of that one.

I’m definitely adding Jason to my fantasy list!! Hot damn! Jason is 100% a dom, and is gonna make allllll the neighborhood bitches, his bitches lol

Can't wait for more

I always enjoy your tails:-) sic. Tales.

Keep 'em Cummin.

Brianne did deserve to have a rough awakening, and learn to act like a more mature and kinder person. Being a beauty only gets you so far. Good for Jason! TTFN

I think it's actually better than hfhm, at least I like this storyline better initially:-)

Bummer, I love your Monster House stories, so I thought I’d like this one, but no. This guy doesn’t respect women. Calling someone a cum rag really turned me off.

A higher floor of a house is a STOREY, even in America, I think!

Also, you DEFUSE (or DE-FUSE) a situation. DIFFUSE is to spread out thinner in gas or liquid. The smoke diffused through the house.

Very interesting start, adult toughness and teenybopper wontoness.

Nice start! Great read.

To the anonymous, cowardly pedant: "story" is definitely spelled without an "e" in American English.

You've definitely opened some doors, but you took your time with the setting and characters and I really appreciate that!

I'm looking forward to where you take this.

This is a better story than HFHM. It’s a little too much of a Teen-Male Power Fantasy. But, there’s no point in asking a leopard to change it’s spots. I read this story several years ago, so I have a general idea where it’s going. But I’m old and mentally deteriorated enough that I don’t remember the details. I’m enjoying this reread. 👍❤️👍

What a way to start off the chapter...5 stars

Mmm mmm GOOD!

That was a nice one

LMAO - I have literally been looking for this story series for months (with no success)....figured I'd drop in and see where HFHMs was at....and what do you know.....turns out you're the author of both of my favorite series.... :)

I am waiting for chapter 89 of HFHM since I have read all of the related stories/books to the novel, so I decided to read this while waiting.

Though it is a completely different genre of story, you have a different writing style for it and yet you are still amazing at how descriptive at being an artist in your writing!

I am not normally into reading this type of story, and yet even with you being the author, you bring it alive and make me want to read more!

Sincerely,

Daniel

really liked it-Dad won out! wondered how he/you were going to work it

you're new to me, and have some fans...looking forward to Ch 2, and see whatever else you've written

5/fave

Dad did it exactly right!

loved the story! I've only read your other story collection "Home for Horny Monsters" which was absolutely great!! i'll be back for more

Any forty-year-old man (or thirty for that matter) who finds teenage children sexually attractive, is not a man. Especially when they are friends with his daughter of the same age.

"Legal" does not automatically equate to something that should be done.

It's obvious by some of the comments that the commenters have never raised a teenage daughter.

If they have, I feel sorry for the daughter.

A few other things are also blatantly obvious.

Mr Anonymous needs to take a chill pill and realize this is a made up story with made up people. They also need to realize that he wasnt around these girls, who mind you are 18 going on 19, and doesnt have that connection with them as he would if he was around them from day one which was even said in the story. there is nothing wrong with a 40-year-old man sleeping with an 18 or 19-year-old girl. Is it ideal? No its not but there isnt anything wrong with it if both parties are consenting to it. Anytime someone tries to say "well actually in the real world......" it just makes them look dumb. Only time its relevant to say that is the dumb ass stories that have dudes with 15 inch cocks that are 7 inches thick thats not even appealing to read about.

Very well written, erotic without being over the top!!

Had to take a look at your other stories, and I'll say this doesn't disappoint!

The stud/slut dichotomy exists because women know that pretty much all men want what they have, especially when they're in their late teens/early twenties, so can afford to be choosey. So to bed a lot of women a man has to meet their standards. To bed a lot of men a woman just has to lower her standards.

We might deplore his morals, but we have to acknowledge he has something women want.

I like this Jason character. Long may he reign.

Instant classic !

The comment referring to 18 & 19 year olds as children is ridiculous. Of course a 40 old man finds them attractive. He’s programmed to do so. Mating is a genetic imperative. If a female looks biologically adult, meaning she has completed puberty, and appears fertile, then any adult male, regardless of age, is going to desire her.

Finding biological adults attractive is not wrong. Depending upon the legal and moral standards affecting the situation, ACTING upon the attraction may be wrong, but having it is completely acceptable.

Frankly, the prior comment sounds like it came from a woman who no longer attracts men, and is bitter about it.

ZK

"Aww dad! You're just no fun!!" How many times have we all heard that? But not usually in this context. I was torn between bad dad and good dad. I suppose good has to win out, but I really wanted bad dad to rail her. That is, the bad me. 😜

This was fun. Thought I'd check this story out while waiting patiently for the next hfhm chapter. Glad I did.