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I'm In Way over My Head

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by Anonymous09/12/17

Intersting

Not a bad story but why in the anal category? So very little of it.

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by mountaincat409/12/17

Bravo! Encore

I was hooked as soon as I read your description of Jessica. She may have gotten more than she bargained for but she seems to have enjoyed it. A virtuoso performance that deserves a sequel. I'd love to hear what Vivaldi's 4 seasons sounds like when the 1st chair violinist has a butt plug up her ass and a vibrator in her twat.

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by Daphne12309/12/17

Thanks

Thanks mountaincat4! I'm working on other stories but I'd like to return to Jessica sometime in the future. I have a feeling she can take more.......

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by Anonymous09/13/17

This is a pretty good story, good writing, no plot gaps. I think this would have been a better story if she had gotten first chair just with talent, and then somehow transitioned to the rest of the story, but it's still pretty good.

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by Anonymous09/14/17

Not a musician

Was excited to read a story that involved a musician and anal - both things near and dear to my heart. However, concert blacks go to the floor. Full stop. No pro would let them walk in the door, much less have the person wearing it CONSIDER it concert blacks. Make it a sexy little black mini that she bought for the audition, but that broke fantasy enough that I couldn't read past her dropping her music.

Sorry - I'm sure the rest was fine.

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by Daphne12309/14/17

Should I even bother submitting stories anymore?

Good grief people are touchy. "Why the anal category?" I thought spanking, butt plugs, ass massage, and anal fisting qualified it for the anal category. Where else would you have put it?

"Better story if she had gotten first chair just with talent" I figured playing the Mendelssohn violin concerto qualified as talented. Plus the maestro even says: "You are certainly one of the most talented and sexy violinists I've come across."

Just the use of the term concert black "broke the fantasy enough that I couldn't read past her dropping her music" REALLY? This wasn't a professional audition, it was for a college, and trust me I've seen a lot of casual dress at college auditions. Sorry that the ONE term kept you from enjoying the rest of the story.

Look, I can take constructive critique but this nitpicking is ridiculous. I put my heart and soul into every story and its a very personal thing to share them with others. It makes me wonder if I should even bother submitting anymore..

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by Anonymous09/16/17

AMAZING

I was ready for my turn! This story was great! Keep writing! Don't let anyone stop your imagination! Let it run wild!

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by Anonymous09/22/17

I LOVED IT...

As a married 'Hot' wife we have found that I am also VERY sexually submissive. And what gets me going faster that anything is not only being treated like she was, but starting the foreplay in public...being made to dress sexy (slutty??*smile*) and being 'shown off' by the man I am with in public, to include being deeply kissed, touched, and even having sex where others either are watching or could walk up with me not having anything close by to cover myself with. I saw a LOT of myself in this story, and to be honest, I was wet to varying degrees from the beginning to the end without letup. Keep up the good work and I will be checking back for more humiliation and sexually degrading of her and other of your HOT stories.
Kisses and licks
catt

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by Anonymous10/03/17

Hooked on Daphne123

I have just finished reading all your stories and I am hooked. You really should do sequels. I like the control aspects in your stories. You may want to go little slower in the stories to give more build up. But please keep writing.

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