All Comments on 'Your Perfect Blowjob'

Brit: You are such a naughty girl. I wish it were me you were writing about! Wow

gr8 job baby !

pun intended :)

Oh Britt!! So cute and so very nicely written!!

Its like I was reading a naughty Dr. Seuss story! Well done!

on her lunch hour nooner,, TK U MLJ LV NV

Lovely erotic. 5 Stars.

After that let me return the favor - my head 'tween your thighs - tasting your flavor! Fingers and tongue bringing you off - I know you'll like it - you won't scoff!

Feeling your body shake and quiver - liquid flowing like a river!

Swallow all from your waterfall!

Lick it up - take it down - the look on your face is not a frown!

Your poem is five stars, Britt - Kisses on your tasty clit!

...that's how it's done girl! Mmmmm...

What a wonderfully erotic, naughty poem. Really erotic details and great rhymes. It really turned me on. My favorite part was: "When the blasting stops, I release my mouth,

Preparing your seed to travel down south.

With a wink and smile, I swallow it down,

Your balls now empty with nary a frown."

Keep up the great work.

Just fantastic!

Love the detail and description you are so right that is the perfect blow job.

Fun work by a poet who obviously enjoys her theme.

Thanks to my friend legsfeettoes for pointing me to your poem.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

The fact that you love sucking cock enough to write this is SO FUCKING HOT. Thank you for sharing!

I second that motion and call for a vote,

Brittni the fellacionato and all do take note.

I liked it so so much <3

I can't even say how much i loved that thanks

This makes me think of a dear dear friend who makes me feel and cum just like this!!!! She is great.

Brittni, you erotic little mink! You have caused another stiffening that can only be staunched by your own devices! No woman has ever composed such a sweet poem about sucking dick; but then, no one I can think of makes such an art of it. Keep that gold pen flowing, and keep my boner growing!

~B

Have enjoyed lots of your stories...stumbled across this and recognized your name...it's great!

5 and fave

How could it be done any better?