All Comments on 'Slave Island Ch. 02: The Beginning'

This story has dragged on about some very non-erotic boring details too long.

Keep going. It is really okay to make it drag out. Just make it worth the wait. I like one comment about how the slave-to-master ratio works out! I'll keep reading.

Patience is a virtue: the reader is transferred into the slave ... waiting, anticipating, afraid, and excited. A slave's life.

I am waiting for the next part!

This story has a slow beginning, but there will be plenty of action later on. BDSM action in many different forms.

The reason for this slow, descriptive start is to paint a clear picture of the characters, environment and society on this fictive island.

Also please note that the story was originally written in our mother tongue, which is not English. We translate it into English and submit it here continuously, but sometimes it might take some time before the next chapter is ready.

Hi, I really love the story so far. I love the picture of the naked slaves and the well dressed masters, especially the lady in black and white that investigates the slave candidates.

Please post more parts!

where is the next chapter??