All Comments on 'Secrets and Rivalry'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Great but I like your longer stories better.

RastanuraRastanuraover 6 years ago
Jockeys

It certainly makes you wonder how many female Jockeys are doing this.

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 6 years ago
not bad

I do not believe I have read any of your longer stories, and yes it is not recommended to wear one while riding a horse in a race

dukexxxdukexxxover 6 years agoAuthor
Questions

@Anonymous - Thanks for the compliment.

@jenorma2012 - Can I ask if you speak from experience? :P Also, please check out my longer ones. I'm proud of them.

@Rastanura - I can't be the first one to have this idea.

Bridget69Bridget69over 6 years ago
Short and sweet

The short stories are often the best ones. This one still managed to give a bit of background for the characters, great sex and a satisfactory conclusion without trailing on and on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Falling in love

I enjoyed your story. I rated it 5 gold stars. People in the 21st Century live in a complex world and we are often emotionally complex. Falling in love can be a challenge when one one or both persons hold fear of emotionally intimacy .Yes, I blundered into such a relationship on a rebound. That relationship fell apart within 2 years. Yoga practice can help women heal their scars from failed relationships.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
continue?

Please can you continue with these characters? Short and sweet was the story but there could be a much longer story in there somewhere with these two.

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