All Comments on 'Retirement Home Massage Therapy Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Wow! More please

MaxyMax66MaxyMax66over 6 years ago
This is so hot

This has been a fantasy of mine forever. I love the women you describe so much. The slut nurse and the smart older lady doing it together could be good? Please write more.

September4decemberSeptember4decemberover 6 years ago
Excellent!!!

Love the story, though you go a little overboard on such a quick fuck to both Emma and the nurse. It would be more exciting to just get to surepticiously touch Emma and have the nurse rub against him as she moves around.

But boy, what a job that would be....heaven, indeed!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

That was excellent

JohnnyRottencrotchJohnnyRottencrotchover 6 years ago
Excellent!

I hope the Reverend Mother dominates him... ties him down and milks him dry and Nurse Adams gets some revenge on him by fucking him dry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Still waiting anxiously for Chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow

Somehow you managed to write a story that seemed quite depraved initially, and yet ended up having a real animalistic eroticism to it. Well done! Looking forward to the next chapter.....

peteh57peteh57over 6 years agoAuthor
Definitely more coming!!

Thanks everyone for the feedback. It means a lot. Apologies that it's taking so long but this feels like a good vehicle and I don't want to screw it up. There is at least four more chapters in the works and If you have any suggestions please send them through.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH Great Fuck AHHHHHHHHHHHHH

bbws4life1991bbws4life1991over 6 years ago
Brilliant!!!

What a fantastic story!!! Could have been a little longer so as to draw out the Nurse's transition from prude to slut, but I really am just nitpicking on what was a great story! Thanks for sharing, and keep up the good work! Favourited and looking forward to the 2nd chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
sexy story

Please continue soon, I'd like to see nurse adams have many more multiple orgasms!

Something about her is just sexy,More please!

amoroneamoroneover 6 years ago
I loved it

Well done, what a fabulous piece of erotic literature.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

NICE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I think this story was inspired by a fetisgroup porn you may have watched. Or straight up and you just gave it a back story. Regardless it was great. I like thick plump older women with big asses. Well I like big assescreen period. No matter the age, but I got plenty young or women my age with big asses. Tho older ones or much older elude me. Making it one of my top fantasies. A nice big granny ass but still shapely and not too old. Like 50s or early 60s

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I know it's fantasy, but that was a bit too "rapey" for me. This chapters content belongs in the non-consent category.

BigGreg8xBigGreg8xalmost 2 years ago

Loved it!!!! Fabulous

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So Emma was a setup by the Reverend Mother Nevertheless I think she deserves some action too To be continued?

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