All Comments on 'Good Hearted'

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swfb70swfb70over 6 years ago
nice

am looking forward to chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Start ...

... and based on the dates of your submissions, welcome back! I look forward reading your history here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

great start to what could be a great series. 5*

arrowglassarrowglassover 6 years ago
This one is special!

I hope you are going somewhere with this!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very cool

I hope you continue this story line. Very well done.

Chevy777Chevy777over 6 years ago
Good work

Very good storyline. But when the next chapter coming??? Its 24 hrs since first chapter and it looooong overdue.

Keep it up. But please hurry.

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
Interesting Beginning

You have my curiosity. Birthmark. Thoughts that influence. New knowledge. Anatomical changes. Subliminal messages.

Where are we going?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Thank you

This is certainly interesting, I'm curious to see where it's going. Onwards to Chapter Two now!

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