All Comments on 'Marie's Story Pt. 01'

by sigmoidflexture

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
beulahthebrit

Has potential, but next time please read through your story and edit it, spelling is a mish-mash of English and American, also story line does not plan out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Awesome

I got a hard on more stories.

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