All Comments on 'Every Dick Has Its Day'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Not Bad at all.

Loved every word till the end. A little anticlimactic. Otherwise, nicely done. Hopefully you continue this storyline?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Where's the proofreader?

It's okay to write in haste, but take the time to read it before sharing. Missing letters (e.g., he instead of her, exhaust instead of exhausted), missing punctuation (brunettes instead of brunette's). Surely you can do better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Funny story

Good imagination. Might work once with girl who had been drinking. lol

rdoolittlerdoolittleover 6 years ago
Alternate ending?

Clever story. What about the ladies finding out and subjecting him to SPH or femdom kink? Just spitballin here. Another chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love the title

I give you a five for the title. Liked the story too..

So in chapter two, do the girls discover that he tricked them and used a dildo? Then, all hell breaks loose...

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I really liked it. It is a shame that women can't enjoy a smaller cock.

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