All Comments on 'Whatnot'

mentioned on the new poems review thread.

The words, the metaphor, the form; not a loose end in sight! Great work, TT2U.

All tied up in knots, yet not..

Great one. A lot of depth and imagery.

Loved this one~~!!

* flying bands of sinew and skin *..

Wow ~~ great line there..

More please..~!!

*Smiles*

I like how this one started with "entertaining the thought" and I got this idea of having a party for the brain which is exactly what you did. great use of sounds to get your messages across

..when I saw it - somewhere - in the folds of the PDF and I still love it. So many clever metaphors and great lines - there's even some tasty alliteration. A hefty 5.

quick and witty, loved the alliteration :)