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Cookies and her Milk

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by Anonymous

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by minniejohn12/06/17

Stopped

Just a little too soon!
Keep it going.

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by Alice_Rosaleen12/06/17

Does she know

He took her in her sleep? Is that why she's lactating or did she make a wish? Does have to be logical, just curious.
I know Santa Claus is coming tonight.

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by Anonymous12/06/17

3*

Cute story but WAAAAAYY. too short.

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by Anonymous12/06/17

Who?

Was she questioning Santa....Or have they been CAUGHT?

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by carygrant_6912/06/17

Loved it but I hope you have a follow-up

Sure would like to read how the two of them develop their relationship both sexually and as adult lovers.

I am writing a stepdaughter story and a man the only daddy she has ever known. The Mom is a bitch and finally in a rage she tell them both that he is not the father which devastates both of them. They find affection, love and lust in each other arms. I could use some help. You story is very well written as to the buildup but could have use a little more sex or are you going to add a second story. I want a series of my stories on the not real incest story section.

Ed

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by carygrant_6912/06/17

You can reach me

carygrant_69@Hotmail.com

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by Gypsy_6912/07/17

Hmmm

I would definitely love to see more. Please do, continue.

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by Thirteenth_Star12/07/17

Who the hell is Sarah?

Sarah drew closer to Santa, her eyes looking up to his in an innocent but seductive manner, her lips pouty as she tilted her head just slightly to the right.

You need an editor..

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by ThomChen12/07/17

I do need an Editor

As @Thirteenth_Star pointed out, I really do need an editor :P
Part of the way through I decided to change her name from Sarah to Casey, guess I screwed up and missed one.

@minniejohn @Gypsy_69 @Alice_Rosaleen I know it was short, partly since I needed to upload this story asap in time for the X-mas 2017 contest, and also cliffhangers are fun ;)

I'll continue the story IF i win the contest.
If I don't win the contest....I'll still continue it anyways cuz why not?

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by nitram512/07/17

Nice.

I like this.

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by TLMorgan12/09/17

Too short, man. I was ready to read more.

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Good Christmas Story

Need to unwrap christmas presents. Next day. Another christmas stroy next tear.

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by Anonymous12/10/17

Decent beginning

Nice build up but for an eighteen year old she's oblivious. The ending was a flop, keep building on their passions.

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by Anonymous12/20/17

More please

Definitely need more

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by Anonymous01/04/18

MORE, MORE, MORE !!!!

GREAT start !!!

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