All Comments on 'You Left Me'

aw nicely written but it saddened me.though it's the realm of life.gosh really hurts.(cinder).

Professional grade writing! You conveyed a wide range of emotions in a stocatto of highly charged words and finely crafted sentences. This is not just good erotica, it is first c!ass writing.

Well done

I like the way you showed us your character's feelings. It was almost zero "dialogue" but the emotions were well structured... Great work!

So many conflicting feelings swept aside by the more powerful need for final contact and proper closure. Great mix of emotional pain and physical pleasure.

I loved reading your story. I hope you write more

I really enjoyed this story, lots of emotions flying about. Thanks for sharing it with us!

I love it I really loved all the emotions