All Comments on 'Caught at the Club'

had such hot potential... then fizzled.

Yup. It had a lot of potential but the ending was abrupt. Could’ve put some blackmail in there instead of just going off after

Sorry ya'll! I knownot was abrupt. I literally right these stories when I can't find one with the same storyline, then when I come, I stop writing and post it. LOL!

Absolutely love this! Would definitely enjoy a part two...? Haha I’m the same way! Get me there and the story is over. Very nice, saving this for later.

this screams for a second part, please keep that in mind because this is a new type of chemistry

Fabulous do part two like they innocently meet at the grocery store or she comes back to the club to see him you could have a couple more good chapters on this perhaps her real daddy could be a part of it some way I loved it

I love this story and think it’s perfect as it is. It’s one I return to often. It’s exactly enough for me too. Thank you for writing it!!!