by hotwifetravels
This belongs in the fantasy category.
Her fantasy doesn't have to end the story. The story itself is fantasy, so why not continue the narrative and have her "actually" hook-up with the two men?
If you look at stories the 1* ratings are from the same "anonymous" user. Maybe that person should get a clue that this is a multi-part story.
Are you a whimpy little white man that is a SJW? LOL. Maybe you should read about men fucking other men up the ass. I think that will be more your style.
This site limits anonymous comments to one per story/chapter per IP address. Generally, that means a commenter cant post multiple comments on a story. I say generally because there are a few ways around it, primarily onion routing, but is outside the abilities of most people.
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The gist of this is that it is NOT one person posting anonymous comments on your story -- or anyone's for that matter.
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BTW, complaining about people being anonymous on the net is like moving next to an airport and then complaining about the noise from the planes taking off.
I will read more for sure. She will be ready for a real encounter now.