All Comments on 'House of Sin: Taking Possession'

well written and looking forward to where this goes next.

Will await future lines for story line. :-)

A good start but I think the story was a bit rushed. The changes could have happened over a few days or weeks to fully the enhance the persona of Lillian. Making the women look like clowns seems counter productive, sexy and seductive would have been better.

Having said that I respect that it is your story to tell.

Paul

I'm wondering what you're going to do with the new girls. Also hoping that Lillian Deshayes has bigger plans than simply making the best whore house ever.

I loved the story, the way everything is described, it's amazing! I can picture the whole thing in my head while reading. Looking forward to more of this story, keep writing.

A great story but I would like to see Sam break free of Lillian's spell, turn against her and destroy her.

P.S. I was fantasizing Wonder Woman as Lillian!😆