All Comments on 'TJ Ch. 04'

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N2BiSex4uN2BiSex4uabout 6 years ago
Drama,

drama, drama, & more drama.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Wonderful story

This is a warm, loving, wonderful story that is moving at a good pace. It would be nice to find out descriptions of Sean and Teej -- like Sean as the captain of the football team could be a muscular young man with the start of a bit of soft hair for his great chest, and a cock that makes Teej drool! Keep their love growing! They seem to be great mature guys!

Nate1980Nate1980about 6 years ago
Love it!

Love it all! My only suggestion is to figure out why the chapters are being linked together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Good story

I really like the story and I hope you continue. If the Bitch gets custody of Josh, that would be bad for everyone. It would be nice to see Kevin and Josh get together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More

I realized stories take time to develop. Please don't keep us hanging for more.

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Damn good story. Feeling all the love and support but guessing Mel the ex-bitch-in-law is about to make an appearance ...

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