All Comments on 'The Bimbo Blazer Ch. 01'

Another great beginning!

Thank you so much for reading and letting me know you enjoyed it! This is a series that I wrote several months ago (which is why the tone/style may be slightly different than my previous works on this site) and I'm grateful you took the time to let me know you liked it, too.

It was pretty great, can't waitfir the next one

if you were actually a nerd then I can relate to this story. I got totally turned of girls because WHO WOULD DATE A NERD FAT GUY!!!!!!!

Loved it. Very much looking forward to the next one.

Great story! This is just what I like to read. A little more description of the sex would be great, but keep on writing!

Love it

I enjoyed it very much. I wonder if Kristi has any friends....

found the next three repetitive. I look forward to dabbling in some of your other work.

Great story, keep on writing!

Childish High School Drivel. Decent descriptions of surroundings and female apperarance saved a 2 star instead of a one.

You said her parents were paying for an apartment, then she was in a sorority (where they live), then you took her back to her dorm room. WHERE is she living?????

This is a drug induced rape story and should be in Non-consent, not mind control. I did not give it a star rating because I don't think I could be objective.

While yes actruly no. It is mind control since it is a drug, that controls the mind using hormones

A rather unimaginative, even boring premise. "The areas of her brain associated with obedience" .... And what areas are those? lol

You can help me...

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Unfathomably based

J.C.! Good story!

$3-6 for a rape story?

Barely developed characters and you lost continuity on where Kristi lives in three ways in only your first chapter.

Hope the 'trajectory' lead to writing classes and keeping your day job.

We should get paid to read this stuff.

Loved it

Hate it! How is this different from any other date rape drug???

Wow

Mind control I think not, Nonconsensual would fit the bill for this. No build up no character development or vey little and certainly no way I’ll be continuing on with this. ⭐️⭐️

I agree with Aussie... I never understand why writers make things so easy for the protagonist. It's SO DAMN BORING. When even your fantasies are boring... You've got some introspection due.

The thing is, this author has skill. So I'm hoping for more in future.

Kristi was clawing fistfuls of the coverlet into her fingers

i'm just gonna leave that there...

Why make her forget? I would want her to remember a good fucking like that. Strange choice to have that effect laced in. Maybe that's just me. Seems kind of pointless to get revenge if the person you get revenge on doesn't remember a thing.