All Comments on 'He Knows How to Treat a Woman'

START with the background on any main character that your reader might consider inhabiting when reading.

i see signs of possibilities here, but your writing is shaky, your story undeveloped, and your offering much too short. you've tried to cram into one short page what ought to be fleshed out into several pages, possibly even several chapters. JMHO/YMMV

I appreciate your feedback. I will take it into consideration in my next story about Hunter Collins

Great lead in. Looking forward to part 2 when grandpa joins the action.