All Comments on 'The Anna Chronicles Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
No incest

How is screwing your wife incest ? Even doing mother in law is not incest

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very poor first effort

Must try (much) harder

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Saimon sandwiches?

Honestly?

"The thought of fish made me imagine what she smells like between her thick legs."

I think that one line says it all. If that's the best erotic thought you have, you might want to try a different genre.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Seriously???

Complete garbage...try writing something else, but not this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Where's the incest? Sorry, just not a very erotic story. Try harder.

No incest. Sorry, just not a very erotic story. Try harder.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

I hope you get to pound that big ass

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