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Cheating Sister In-law

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/11/18

Greg

Why stop the story at one page?! Damn it, now I'm gonna be climbing the walls, waiting impatiently for the next chapter. This was so freaking good, you gotta have more pages. Then again, you're the author so you know what you are doing, just can't wait for the next chapter.

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by Anonymous04/11/18

More please

Yes, this is a great start to a great story line. Hurry with the next edition

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by PretendWithMe8704/11/18

Working on next chapter.

The next chapter is in the works. Hopefully it will be up soon.

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by Anonymous04/12/18

peeves...

One of the things that annoys me, that ruins a good story, is the split perspective. As for spelling/grammar/vocab & punctuation, It is very important, but certain allowances van be made...

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by Anonymous04/12/18

No incest

Brother in-law or stoner do not qualify as incest

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by UAlbanyGirl51804/12/18

Good start

Was enjoying it and then it abruptly ended. Looking forward to more.

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by LeanderGuy04/15/18

Looking forward to what he makes her do!

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by pastaman4711/26/18

Great start

First, I'm not all that crazy about the split perspective either, but that being said, this is a good foundation for your series. Do what you enjoy the most about writing and don't let other people influence your story content. Keep it up. I know you did for me.

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