by titsRus35
Okay job
I again repeat it's better to have a story that is 2-3 pages on here.
So I'm going to check the next chapter when you post it. If you can make it any good then I will save it to my book marks on my computer. But I will wait until I read the next chapter before I give my honest opinion. But so far it seems like it's really fast paced.
Yes, she is definitely showing off and teasing her brother. Hopefully, he will get his chance to screw her big boobs and her at some point when Jen sees what he has to offer. A big cummer multiple times is just what a horny babe like that needs. Cannot wait for her to find the cum filled bra and when she confronts him, etc. Thank you.
Written well in the voice of an 18 year old boy blessed...or cursed...with hourly blood-engorged erections. Good job.
Pump the 'breaks'? Did you perhaps mean 'BRAKES'. It makes a difference.