All Comments on 'Football, Fairies, & Valentine's Day'

A well-written, classy, out-of-the-blue love story. Need more of these around!

And it IS, I promise. A very delicious mix of sweet, sweat, and spice. Happy Valentine's Day, dear one. ~Imp

Excellent character development, nicely balanced suspence subtheme, and a great story line. Kept me riveted all the way through.

Thanks for this wonderful story!

A very thrilling story. I could hardly wait until the end. Spellbinding to say the least. and in the valentine season. Give us readers more.

I found this excellent.

Keep the quality up, and try some sequels to the chaptered submissions already begging for them, maybe Megan's secret, that ending is rather suggestive ... :-))

Bye

John/Namizujs

Budapest

I was hooked from the beginning, great character development. Oh to be the focus of a man such as this! Good luck!

What more can I say than loved it!

A really fine piece of romance.

I quite enjoyed watching the protagonist solve the mystery of Cindy.

Well done.

I read 2 stories today and they are both excellent? Can my heart stand the strain? Great job! A good read. The quality on Lit may be coming up!

5/5 on this one!

Such an engaging read. I adored every moment of it!

Great story of fate, destiny and searching for that one person you've met during one brief encounter and that you thought you've lost forever. Loved it!

I had never read your stories before. This was stark and gritty, and ultimately very romantic. Bravo to you!

You won me over a while ago in the AH with your honesty and sweetness (and that AV, oh my!). This story sealed the deal. It was sweet and romantic, but so raw and open at the same time. Thank you so much for sharing it!

Reminds me of movies like Sleepless In Seattle and Serendipity. Wonderful romance of destiny, with just enough erotic tinge to add to the fun.

Wonderful stuff!! I will have to check out your entire portfolio.

- JT

Love the mystery! Good dialog! Hot sex! Great job, Bel!

this is a solid story. perfect length, great story line, makes for good writing

Bel,

That was a first-class bit of writing. Who would have thought a despondent Chargers fan could have rising to such heights? Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

Terrific story. Nice to know that romantics can still win. There is magic.

Bel, wonderful work as always. The magic really does exist. I liked the fact that Cindy was looking for Brad at the same time he looked for her, and the love scene was very hot. Good luck to you.

Great writing fast paced covered time and emotions. Loved it

Good start just want more of the story.

Great short story, fully developed in a short form, nicely done!