All Comments on 'The Boy'

That wasn't bad. A bit fast paced; almost too fast. If you continue this story, consider fleshing out the characters a bit more. It got a little confusing when Daddy talked about Mathew. I thought he was a lover. Then he was spoken of as a son. Was he one or the other or both? And then Ant being his (Mathew) 19 year old son? How old are these characters?

Overall it was a good read with good potential.

Schubert never finished his eighth symphony but the torso is one of his greater works, perfect as it is. But I’m not sure that this applies to your story. Yes it’s good but you obviously had some ideas about her it was going. And it would be good if you could share them with us by completing the story. It’s intriguing and could end up in a number of ways. Pleas don’t leave us guessing.

Thanks for posting

Other than being a little fast paced it was good and has the potential to be really good. I would like to see a few more chapters with more character develpment.

Dang I was thinking there has to be a twist at the end but i was way off in what it turned out to be. I thought this was going to take a dark turn and one of them was going to kill the other, anyways good job.

Please do continue the story......

I like the story, I agree with others, it moved a little fast, but please continue, would like to hear what happens next. Do they stay together or does finding out that he is his late boyfriends son spoil everything?

I got a private feed back (much appreciated, BTW!), but it was from an anonymous user, so I couldn't reply. (I hate that!) To answer the question, the father that kicked Ant out wasn't Mathew. Mathew knew nothing about having a son. I've decided to rewrite this story in third person, so I can change perspectives, and I'll take my time with revealing the story (and change a few things) because it seems to be so confusing to so many. Guess I'll just chalk this one up to a failed attempt, and will seek redemption with a new attempt. Thanks for all the feedback, though. It's helpful.

Great please keep it going love your writing. Thanks bobby.

Can’t wait for a three part series. So much raw material at the ready. I

Mind blown

Okay you cannot leave this story with that ending!!! How did Ant find out? Did Callum know that Mathew was bi? There are too many questions that need answers here.

Wtf second chapter needed am like whoaaaaa

Didn't expect that ending which was great. However, the story moved to fast and I would suggest you develop the characters a bit more. I enjoyed it.

They have to be more of the story. Where do we go from here. We need more of the story. Because I have a feeling, that Ant Grows up to be a fine gay man but has to break Daddy heart so he can grow on his own. Or daddy has to tell him to go he loves him enough to send him on his way ..

You have GOT to take this further! This is a beautiful story and needs to go further! It is a great cliffhanger to end on but please think on it! Thank you