All Comments on 'Morning Surprise'

by Rallynoangels

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sirhugssirhugsalmost 6 years ago
All this story is missing

is Marie licking Joan clean. Though I suppose that might make Rick late for work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awesome First Chapter!

Awesome First Chapter!

MrMac98MrMac98almost 6 years ago
Good Start

I agree with this being Chapter One BUT Joan went from being his step daughter to being his daughter in law? I enjoyed the story and look forward to future episodes... good set up for twists and turns!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
More is welcomed

Do bring more, this was a great start.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
HOT

WHEN CAN I HAVE THEM BOTH?

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 6 years ago
Beautiful story of love

All families should experience such uninhibited love

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