All Comments on 'Loving His Baby Girl'

1 star

DragonRider55

this was a fucking train wreck of a story. absolutely horrible.

I WAS DISAPPOINTED AS IT WAS JUST GETTING GOOD!

You knew what reaction you'd get and you also knew you'd write more.

However, just a little hint, if you make the chapters that short you will piss your readers off. Getting them mad won't give you the votes you'd like.

I agree with the other comment, you know you'll write more. This was a cry for attention. You're a good writer, but if all your stories are this short, you've just lost me.

Keep going, as long as you don't bring anyone else into it.

Wish for more I can remember me and dad and the fun we had

I agree with earlier comments, keeping chapters this short will piss readers off. besides, we need to find where this is going. a little more character development would be good.

Short, perhaps a little too short. Hopefully new chapters will allow the story to develop. I hope so, it certainly has great potential.

Would like to see more

This was a good start to what could be a good story.

Is babygirl voicing her journey to acceptance of the immediate, as well as long term implications. Call me a romantic -yeah, on an incest forum - but for me those stories are so much less guilt ridden to enjoy than the forced/coercion/non-compliance genres

Pretty annoying how short it is.

Made me wish I had a daughter to get hot and bothered, and then could fill her teenage snatch full of daddy dick.

Hope this story continues

Chapter 2 then 3 as soon as possible! Fuck her soon and often. Get her very pregnant !

Good start, though a little more background on the characters in the beginning would have been nice, is he a single dad? What happened to mo, or can we expect an excited mom to show up latter, maybe joining in? But over all a good start.

I wish I had a Daddy like that! That made me so wet!

It would be hot if you had his wife join or have the daughter talk dirty to him and beg him to get her pregnant. Or even have the dad have a adult breastfeeding fetish

This is incredible I loved it! A Daddy making his girl his❤️

Please write more!! I loved this delicious tale. Made me very horny. Describe your daddy in more detail - your preference. <3

Can Daddy wait.?

Would love a babygirl like this. I'd be so good to her.

I thought this was so erotic. From personal experience this brought back memories of my daddy and me. We made two perfect babies.