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by The_Maniacal_Nymph

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TANSTAAFL58TANSTAAFL58almost 6 years ago

Nicely done. Very descriptive narrative. You clearly wrote what you feel. The storm as accompaniment was a great touch. Can't wait for the next one (Maybe his perspective, also masturbating to the same storm?)

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