by Sexybeast8899
Loved the story, the build up. The onl negative comment i have is that it ended so quick once the sex started
This story is a MUST READ if you are into wife sex stories.
The story is VERY EROTIC & TOTALLY REALISTIC!
The STORYLINE was INTELLIGENTLY CONCEIVED, & SKILLFULLY CRAFTED.
If a woman has a FRAGILE SELF ESTEEM she needs positive affirmation of her looks & her personality. If on top of that, she is not happy in her marriage, she is ripe for a fling or an affair.
i love women in heels , love the way you discri\be them !
Hot, enjoyable co-worker fantasy. Your writing style is straight forward and descriptive. Most of us know "ordinary" women at work or otherwise who turn into sexy vixens with the right hair, makeup, clothes and shoes. I always have my woman wear high heels when I fuck her.
I love Love women dresses well and in heels . Keep up the good work !
I’ve read this author before and like him, but this story wasn’t as good or as well written as the one I read 1st. He needs to edit. Editing his story would make a huge difference. In its current form the errors draw attention away from the story. Also I want more detail. I would have scored The story much higher had there been more description of erotic situations once they were inside the hotel room. Very little Time was spent on letting us know what happened inside the room and that could’ve been epic. I think this author is more than capable of being able to write A phenomenally steamy, erotic story, it’s simply a matter of getting the erotic details all there with out editing errors. He has the imagination and can put us there with him. I look forward to reading more of his. It could be that this was one of his very 1st stories too.
Enjoyed the interaction between the characters. Reminds me of a time when I was younger and had a work relationship with a young woman. My ending was not as lucky.
Katie is a keeper.
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Oh man! My wife has worn heels like that and drove me crazy with lust! I have seen guys drool over her. I took a photo of her in sheer nude to the waist pantyhose with see-through nylon crotch and a pair of heels like that.