All Comments on 'Family Business'

my hubby blew twice while i read it to him.

the story was excellent. don't leave us hanging for too long. i can't wait for the next chapter.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

when's the next chapter, and put ronnie in the next one to

came so hard i blacked out

This was a HOT one! I loved it and I can't wait to read more the sooner the better.

holly hell made me cum so many times

Totally awesome, keep it up.

yeah right on the size..be more realistic next time

Realism is over-rated

Boy this was a hot and very vrotic story!! I loved Ronnie having orgasms and then Mom having orgasms too. HJookers don't usually get that involved in their relationships. Very good story. Now do Jenny and then invite ronnie home for the weekend withjenny and mom. Lets have a free-for-all!

What a tale! Nicely done...you gave this 70 year old man a viagra-less hard on!

TopOTampa

If someone wants realism, go walking around where ever you live--I like fantasy--especially one as good as this one. Looking forward to next part. JimD

Who needs realism, this was a truely great story. Very hot and it seems from the other comments that many readers greatly enjoyed it.

I think we are all eagerly looking forward to reading more!

I'm looking forward to the second chapter of this story!

keep it going excellent.

Great story, good build up, and the ending left me wanting more! That's what I like in my fantasy, enough to be real while also making me say "ThatLucky Stiff!"

and fantasy, with big tits and a monster cock! And sister applauding in the wings... so we'll know what to expect, next..........

Lukas

Doesn't get much better! I enjoyed it immensly! You had some nice visuals! Not much reality but who cares!

I haven't read anything this hot since G.H. Lawrence or Bobby T had posted a story...way to go!

Bring on chapter 2. I can't wait.

Still waiting for the sequel!

Gigantic racks and obscene monster pricks. Fuck who needs anything else! This one caused me to damn near rip my dick off! Good fucking show!

good and funny story,good read.

WOW! That was wonderful. I don't think anyone will nominate it for a Nobel Prize in Literature, but that story certainly made my dick get hard.

Nookiehunter

Wow, that was great! I would love a sequel, though I'm not really optimistic.

couldn't stop reading. when does Jenny get involved? would love to read all about it.

Jason looks like he is going to be a stud. This story is hot. I wish you would have continued.

a guy with a 12" dick,

mom with a super big tit and a super deep pussy to accomodate a 12" dick reads like complete nonsense

enjoyed the story ,need to write a whole series

you need a series or more chapters of this story

Haha that's hilarious he's got a donkey dick...... Anyway Great story!!

more stories of horse-hung boys like your hero Jason? You were in your early 20s when you wrote this excellent story, so your hot young balls were as stimulated as 18 year old Jason's, ready to fuck any twat around. It was inevitable that Jason's big fat prick should finally find its way up his mother's cunt. It takes a mother to fully appreciate what her boy's got swinging between his strong young legs. When he was a kid mom used to call it "your little pippy." Now her son protests, "Mom, my pippy ain't so little anymore!" And to prove it the boy drops his pants and boxers and proudly shows his mother his big meaty prick cascading over his big loaded balls. Mom is stunned and says, "Honey, that's a Super-Pippy you've got there!" His mother has just got to heft her boy's massive pippy and cup his big balls, or as much as she can fit in her small hand. Of course his big fat pippy gets hard in his mother's hand, and mother and son grin at each other. There's only one place for the boy to shove his big stiff pippy, as there is for all boys' pippies--right up his own mother's twat. Finally the boy unloads his young balls and floods his mother's mommy-cunt with big doses of his creamy young semen--from the boy's balls to his mother's twat, via his big fat pippy!

I loved it, now I wanna read about him fucking Jenny & then the two together, squashed between 4, huge tits, I think that's got to be one of the best ways to leave this earth, thanks Ranch

PS please don't take too long :-)

WISH YOU OR SOMEONE WOULD CONTINUE

Now its Jenny's turn..........please.

You need an editor. Dissent vs. descent, there vs. their, etc. But keep writing.

I hope part 2 is in the works.

Will it continue been almost 15yrs

An excellent story. I hope to read once the next chapter about Jenny....

Sequel please

3 stars for a story that had me on the edge of my seat ready for more only to be disappointed that it was wrote in 2005 what a let down since the low score.

WOW.....one of the greatest ever. Loved his big cock raping and destroying Mom and Ronnie cunt. Loved it. more coming soon i hope

Good Read