All Comments on 'The Book Signing Pt. 01'

Another masterpiece and about the hottest author on Lit...Brittni. This story is well written with the best description of the sexual interactions. Looking forward to more parts. 10 Stars...oops can give no more than 5...can I vote twice?

I loved how you said I whispered the nastiest shit in your ear...yep, that's me...I loved this first installment of this epic story. Bill, you are a great writer who knows how to paint a picture of pure debauchery....5 stars from me...kisses...Britt

I love how you give such detail that it makes you think that you are there. 5 stars all the way!

So if I read that other story it will tell me what a VFW is, and how you make bones?

You didn't even say why or how you retired, or from what and where.

Loose start. Best for your own writing if you just explain things as you go instead of telling me to read someone elses story.

Didnt bother going past the bones thing.

OMG, what an erotic start to what is going to be a really hot, best seller and a total turnon for all readers. Love you FountainPen, you know how to push all of the right buttons. I see there is now a part 2 to views. Great job. Xoxoxoxoxo Annette

PS i love when you include little ole me xoxoxoxoxo

and almost believable! lol Certainly fodder for jealousy, knowing how hot Brittni is! Not so much into the pee stuff, but you did warn us, so whatever. We can only wish to have been the male protagonist in this!

Wow! That is a hot story! I love the chemistry between them.