All Comments on 'Living Works of Art Ch. 02'

Best sort of cliffhanger!!!

JB, in Ch. 01, it was 5 years, not 3 in Ghana! Sorry, but all the years doing title work in real estate made me notice details. But I still rated your story 5 stars. I don't come to this site for minor details. I come for the sexual exploits of the characters. And I want to be Harry with Carol and Susan. I wish I could find just one woman like that!

Hot, juicy and fucking kinky. Let’s hope the story covers two more years so he can fuck the snot out of Samantha.

But I’m not sure how I like him playing both women, yeah Susan has a few skeletons in her closet and they are probably going to have a blow up about her recent activity with that new guy buying property. As well as carol who basically admitted she would cheat when/if he left for some odd reason or another if they got back together. I don’t know this whole situation is weird... I enjoy the story to be sure and I want to know what’s going to happen. also his Daughter is unusually comfortable with all this sexual tension and giving off her own for a 16 year old...

This story, as it stands, leaves too much in swamp of curiosity to reach a 5* rating for me. A pending segue at the end would have made it but you left me hanging. I hope you have a strong finish or continuance because I really like this story.

Thanks for the entertaining read and for sharing your time.

interesting story, a good read, not as grammatically genteel as the first chapter. But again I enjoyed the change of non-over usage of sexually graphic details I normally read, but, I do enjoy the over usage also at times. lol

One observation, just doing quick math in this menage a trios. Carol and Susan's sexual adventures add up quickly to put poor Harry at a disadvantage of maybe 10 to 1. and that is just guessing. lol

This proves a belief I have had for a long time, 85% of women will out copulate men 96% of the time.

Anyway enough about that, enjoyed the story so far. I see an incest path in the mix and I know you write these, I hope it doesn't occur, but it is not my story. It is not my preference but I find this story interesting enough to follow through with it to the end

Go for jack Reacher, I never miss one!

How exactly does a 16 year old on the left coast know everything her estranged father does, when he lives in New York? Also, Susan's character is seriously underdeveloped.