All Comments on 'Shay'

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KennyC313KennyC313over 5 years ago
Very Good

Enjoyed this quite a bit. It being taboo always makes the sex better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Best of the Month.

Maybe best of the year. Oh how wish we had a girl like Shay.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please more

The hottest story I've read all year.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 5 years ago
Hot, hot, hot

When a young, horny girl knows how sexy she is, and is the hottest one around, she's like a walking time bomb about to explode. Zach didn't stand a chance--she had him eating out of her hand (and pussy) for an amazing weekend.

Great story. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
She was way hot

Very hot! Glad to see you posting again. Wish the protagonist hadn’t married boring old Lisa, makes me a little sad at the end

18rabbit18rabbitabout 5 years ago
This needs part 2

You left the hint, so I'm asking for it. Sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I can't help but think....You're Shay.

Great story, Even better buildup...a sequel is definitely wanted.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Lisa seemed boring 😴

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Ryan married the slut Shay....other than sex how were they compatible

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