- Fetish
- Two Hundred Dollars Ch. 04
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All Comments on 'Two Hundred Dollars Ch. 04'
by xtorch
- 8 Comments
pervoover 5 years agoI think you are giving me a spanking fetish. This story has so much further potential. Keep up the good work.
xtorchover 5 years agoAuthor"I think you are giving me a spanking fetish."
You're welcome! Chapter 5 is already on the way.
Anonymousover 5 years agoThe title of this story is what initially got my interest. Although I am not a spanking fetish kind of guy, the story is well written and keeps me wanting more.
Anonymousover 5 years agoThe quality of your writing only makes this story better. Thanks for a great series.
xtorchover 5 years agoAuthorThe idea for this just sort of hit me, and I've really enjoyed explaining the Bailey character. She just seems so conflicted and interesting, I love writing her internal dialogue/monologue.
Xav.
P.S. Chapter 5 is already on the way through the Literotica publishing pipeline.
Anonymousover 5 years agoWonderful twist! I like the tension in the room and this little contest.
xtorch@xtorch
