by Dray26
I though this was pretty good, can't wait for part 2 will they or will they not that is the burning question
You have taken your time building the plot and introducing the characters. Excellent start cannot wait for the next posting. Five Stars wish I could award more.
Nicely drawn characters and situation. I can see that Karen will go for it, if she can overcome her guilt. I guess we need to see if Jess will give Karen permission (or take the first step).
Please continue. I'd like to see where you will take this.
I loved that you didn't use labels, the whole story felt very realistic, the scenes under the cover were very exciting, the slow awakening of desire was very very well executed.
And am looking forward to the other two chapters. Thanks for sharing this with us!
(Smiling) As if the title doesn't tip you off to the outcome, I think it's getting there I will enjoy the most. The series is off to a good start