by Dray26
Your story is great ,, but can you make a little longer each chapter ,, bcz its really exciting.
You are developing the characters so well cannot wait for the next installment.
Can't wait for the next chapter I seriously hope it comes soon (as well as them lol) I'm literally.on the edge of my seat!
Thanks so much for the comments. The conclusion is longer, and should be posted in a few days. Hopefully you will enjoy it. I know I'm going to miss Karen and Jess, and who knows? If there is enough interest I may continue their story.
If you get a chance, please read my other short stories, which also focus more on character development than on hard-core sex. A conclusion to "Open House" will be completed soon.
I love your writing style. Very descriptive, engaging, seductive, and hot! I need Chapter 4!!!
These "minute stories" are getting on my nerves. They're too damn short! But good thing they're coming quickly. See ya, gotta go. Another one has been posted
i cant stand when i find a story i like and it actually draws my attention and then after a decently long first part the others are all just one page short as hell chapters.